Verrrrrry dark, but I also see a lot of deep workings here. :) It will be really fun to watch this character unfold. I think this is very well done.
The only bit I might suggest adding is an explanation as to how the Hume family came to power in the nation of San d'Oria. The Elvaan there dominate the nation and are pretty much racist to all the outsiders (the races of other nations aren't fond of each other, either). Elvaan are traditionally against Humes in particular, only hating the Tarutaru more. So Humes would be an uncommon group to have an estate for from… unless Gyle were to, for example, be an Elvaan. That's not to say its impossible by any means though for a Hume to grow rich in San d'Oria through trade, etc.
Overall though it isn't the huge thing and as the profile is, I believe, is well done. :) Now to get you into the roleplay!
SinFlux Member replied
640 weeks ago